mandi's awesome story

perswasive writing 

I absolutley believe that living in the country is better than living in the city,and here are the reasons why grass lands,fresh air and less people.

In the country there is more grass lands than in the city.It means that we can have more trees that clean the air,Ride hores and see animals.

The air in the country is more fresh than the city because in the country there is more trees.

The city has less grass lands cause of the buldings,pathways,roads and shops.

The air in the city is much worse than in the country cause airpollution and smoke.

there is less people in the country than in the city the country is much more peaceful .In the city there's cars,buses,shouting,workshops and trains.

mandi's flag

The stars took me to wonderland of the rainbow

As I walked across the emerald green shiny grass  the snow white moon was shining down on me like a spotlight.

The wind roared and the trees danced in the sparkling stars, it was so bright  that my eyes were burning.

A shiver went down my back like a winter roller coaster. I followed the lines of stars they were different colors.

At last I reached the top of the big hill and  saw a city of lights covered in frost .

The frost on the trees sparkled at me it was like the stars took me to a frosty wonderland.