Swimming Recount

I'm in a noisy bus and all my friends are chatting away .

We are going swimming ,nearly everyone has their swimming bag. We arrived and all of us rushed to the doors of MILLENNIUM!!!

We walk through the hallway smelling the most yum food ever.

Mrs Foster lead us to the changing rooms . we ran into the changing room  to see who gets changed first.20 seconds later catrina races out. she's done already then Anita then me and the others.

We are all done getting changed .all of us go and sit down on the benches getting told what to do. we all go one by one into the pool doing freestyle .Im half way up the pool than jaeha rushes behind me . we go sit down and hear what group we are in for next week.

mandi's awesome story

perswasive writing 

I absolutley believe that living in the country is better than living in the city,and here are the reasons why grass lands,fresh air and less people.

In the country there is more grass lands than in the city.It means that we can have more trees that clean the air,Ride hores and see animals.

The air in the country is more fresh than the city because in the country there is more trees.

The city has less grass lands cause of the buldings,pathways,roads and shops.

The air in the city is much worse than in the country cause airpollution and smoke.

there is less people in the country than in the city the country is much more peaceful .In the city there's cars,buses,shouting,workshops and trains.

mandi's flag

The stars took me to wonderland of the rainbow

As I walked across the emerald green shiny grass  the snow white moon was shining down on me like a spotlight.

The wind roared and the trees danced in the sparkling stars, it was so bright  that my eyes were burning.

A shiver went down my back like a winter roller coaster. I followed the lines of stars they were different colors.

At last I reached the top of the big hill and  saw a city of lights covered in frost .

The frost on the trees sparkled at me it was like the stars took me to a frosty wonderland.

                    

Before

I opened the door and there were kids everywhere.  Boys were climbing out of the window and there were  paper airplanes all over the place.My best friend Anna was holding a rat from the science lab and the rest were running all over the room.Anna told me there were no teachers

         after           KIDS ONLY!!!

 As I swung the door open I saw my friends not sitting on their seats,they were standing on the table like the Statue of Liberty. Rats ran every where like a army ready for battle. I smelt paint and the thickness of the white board pens.
I heard the kids screaming like a Eagle who had found its prey. The boys were standing on the table dancing like they were on Britan's got Talent. The rats had red  eyes like a Vampire looking for blood to drink. 
I called Anna and said '' Whats going on ?'' Anna said,'' There are No Teachers!''.

                                The forest!!                                 Before                                   

Come to my cool,silent forest.You'll love the peace and cool colurs.                                                                                                  After                                                                                                   As I walk into the peaceful and silent forest,I can see the sun peeking through the misty  clouds.I hear the leaves cracking under my feet like fire burning the cold wood.As I walk deeper I smell the salty river a mile away.I can taste the bitter grapes although I'm not eating any. I haven't seen the sun rising out of the roof made by the trees for a month.  When I make my way out of the creeping forest I look back and see the sun again. By Mandi Edited by Gizlle!