The forest!!                                 Before                                   

Come to my cool,silent forest.You'll love the peace and cool colurs.                                                                                                  After                                                                                                   As I walk into the peaceful and silent forest,I can see the sun peeking through the misty  clouds.I hear the leaves cracking under my feet like fire burning the cold wood.As I walk deeper I smell the salty river a mile away.I can taste the bitter grapes although I'm not eating any. I haven't seen the sun rising out of the roof made by the trees for a month.  When I make my way out of the creeping forest I look back and see the sun again. By Mandi Edited by Gizlle!